A Bassline!
I like the instruments and composure! I am glad you added a bassline aswell! Good to hear. But the chords are off. Now that you are better with instruments and composing, I suggest you practice with the melodies, just to make sure there are no off-notes or anything. But yeah, like I said, I am very glad to see a bassline and this many different instruments. Keep practicing man, you'll keep getting better! God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
I KNEW IT WASN'T ME! I thought it sounded kinda odd, but i was so tired i thought my hearing was on the fritz XD. Dont worry, ill upload another version with a better chord selection. I knew you would like a bassline. I'll practice on the melody until i get this right because i worked hard on this song. EQing it, reverbing it, and mastering it! I always like your reviews man!
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos
Good!
OK, the melody is great! I like the lead synth too. But it needs more. Every song needs a bassline. So I would definately add that. Also, there needs to be more to the drumbeat. You know, some hihats and other dance beat like stuff. I do like the echo on the synth, that is nice. But just add more! More drums, some bass, just stuff to fill it in. Then it'll be very good! Oh, and about fact 12, it's Newgrounds, zerobombing is practically inevitable for every submission! Keep up the work man, good improvement! God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Lol U got a point, i really cant stop these guys XD.
Thanks for saying the melody is good, i had to do it all by ear. Believe me i will add a bassline. Hihats sound like a good idea, but im really not good at drum beats. Thanks for the awesome review!
EDIT: My synth went haywire, so updated with the gold saw synth i was talkin bout. Dont sound different though.
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos
Nice!
No Twilight Techno ripoff here, just coolness! Great dance song man, I love this kind of stuff the best! It has your signature style and beat, just great! Continue the amazing work on this one man, it will surely be a great one! And mastering seems fine to me, good stuff all around! God bless! (Oh and could you check out my new teaser song? I barely worked on it, I just put it up because I liked the synth so much!)
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Hey man, yeah thanks a lot ! I didn't want the techno i was so proud of to be a ripoff xD
But yeah, thank you so much man, im glad you really like this dance music im starting to do. Im a huge fan of TuneUp, and there HandsUp music is amazing.
Masterings good? Okay thanks, I needed a second opinion xD
Ill go check that out man!
Beats4Beets
Big improvement! 9.5/10
I would give this a 9.5, but that isn't an option! Big improvement though! I really like to see you progress. The overall composition is really good as usual, it doesn't get too repetitive or anything so that is a big plus! I really like the instruments your using in this one, much more fitting for the genre. The bassline adds a whole new amazing dimension, don't you think? I really think basslines are one of the most important things so I am very glad to see that you added one. I like the kick a lot. Nice and powerful, but not overbearing. And this does definately have a good Sonic feel. Oh, and the ending is good, it tapers off to a good finish. My main advice is as always, keep experimenting. The more you experiment, the more amazing things you find. And I can truly see a lot of improvement in your music. Keep it up my friend! God bless you!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Wow! I cant believe i got this far!
Thanks for your review Icemaster, really means alot. Nice to know u like the instruments on this song. I plan of fixing this up little by little, so keep checking in for updates ok? I was really concerned with the finish, nice to know it doesn't bother anyone. The kick will be even more better when i fix the filter. I will continue to experiment! And nice to know the alternative melody doesn't drive the sonic feel from the song. As for the bassline, yeah i agree. I got the idea for the sound of the bassline from listening to Basshunter-All I Ever Wanted. I guess Nexus Really is handy after all. Im not happy how this turned out, as i could've done better, but i will constantly update this until i am satisfied. I really appreciate your review!
Angels Gone Rogue
-DJ Chaos
Haha, shuffle...
Shuffle is totally serendipitous man, it's cool stuff! I like your hardstyle side, it's pretty cool! I really like hardstyle because of the beat and stuff, but I love your dance melodies. I would love to see you mix them, you know, like some hard dance stuff! But that doesn't mean that this isn't awesome, because it is! I like this a lot man, and don't worry about distortion, that's what gives it it's hardstyle! BTW what synth is this? Crazy cool! God bless, man!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
ahh
thats a nifty idea!
great!
thanks dude!
:D
o the synth is sytrus and nexus layered.
harder sound and kinda detuned.
i like it though!
thanks
-chimy727
SORRY I'M LATE!!!
I am very sorry that I am soooo late!!! I was away at my grandma's house and that kinda stuff! I'm really sorry! Anyhow, I can definately hear improvement! I really like the part that starts at 1:10! That is a cool melody. Good use of multiple instruments and good use of reverb. It's good to see you using effects like that. Keep experimenting with all the instruments in FL, because you could very likely find one that you like more than these. But as far as the overall song goes, it has good structure. Next time you make a song, experiment with a bassline. Yep, and Treysen's review is very good, those are things that I would suggest aswell. You are absolutely getting better at this so keep experimenting! I hope my review could help! God bless, man!
Thnx. I was hopping someone would catch the reverb i used.
Dont worry about being late, i knew u would show up sooner or later XD.
By the way, i just got nexus, but the download i got was corrupted, and i only managed to salvage the software itself. it has no content, and i was wondering how do i get some?
Wow....
I am impressed. You finished this so quickly but with such quality! I am thouroughly impressed by this! I mean, a WiP and full version in one day?! I am very glad that I motivated you to make this, that is really cool! The piano solo is absolutely awesome! Amazing job on that. I love everything about this, like I said in the WiP. Definately everything and more than I had expected to hear. You should pursue a career in this direction, man. Great job! God bless!
5, 10, Download, Fav!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Thank you so much man, it means a lot. I was quite honest though, i wanted to finish it right away simply because you thought it was so good.
I did think the piano solo was a more unique touch to my song and style. :)
Thanks a bunch again man for the good words.
I am thinking about career choices xD
Thanks for everything :)
Beats4Beets <(^.^<)
Help you out you say?
Dude, this song doesn't need any help, it's totally awesome! Amazing bassline, kick, lead synth, melody, beat, and it also progresses nicely! I really do love this song, I am excited for the final version! I kinda wish I made this! I think I asked you this once before, but what is the lead synth used in this? It's amazing. Great song, God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Wow man thanks a lot! Im really glad you think nothing's wrong with it xD
You know, after hearing the song over and over again you stop liking it.. So im happy that its really that good ! :D
This is probably the best review you gave me!
The main lead i used was .. (and i dont like breaking it to everybody) ReFx Nexus -> Dance Leads -> Eurobuzzer 2
Also, on Nexus, click on 'Mod' then under portamento click on 'PLY' Then ajust the slur to the melody. You can use it to anything..
The default is 1/32 but it can be a tad excessive for a slur, so it put i t at 1/64 (click on the 1/32..)
So yeah, thats my favorite lead synth ! XD
I better not hear it in your next song! xD
Jk buddy, it doesn't belong to me, its all yours. :)
Thanks again for the awesome review man.
Beats4Beets <(^.^<)
Nice!
Good song right here, man! It's a wip so the full version will be longer, so length isn't a complaint. I like the secind synth in the second half. I would suggest just a few things: more of a melody, the one you have now is almost just a bassline, so make the melody more complex. Maybe a bit more bass? IDK, it sounds good so far, and the composition of the song is great! Good job man, and God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Of course
I just knew it would be great! I heard about 3 seconds then I downloaded it. I love this song and this is an exceptional remix. Great work man, you really made a fine song out of this one. Keep up the great work, man, and God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>
Hey everybody! I love life. This is because I have dedicated my life to Jesus Christ. He is my ultimate source of happiness in life. I also love God's gift of music. Feel free to listen to some of the songs I've made!
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