Good!
OK, the melody is great! I like the lead synth too. But it needs more. Every song needs a bassline. So I would definately add that. Also, there needs to be more to the drumbeat. You know, some hihats and other dance beat like stuff. I do like the echo on the synth, that is nice. But just add more! More drums, some bass, just stuff to fill it in. Then it'll be very good! Oh, and about fact 12, it's Newgrounds, zerobombing is practically inevitable for every submission! Keep up the work man, good improvement! God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>